Writing to couples
Messages for the couple: 4 examples across 1 occasions
Writing to two people at once usually produces something addressed to neither. The default is to praise the relationship in the abstract, which tells them nothing they do not already have.
The stronger move is to name what they are like together specifically - the dynamic an outsider can see and they cannot.
Observers hold information about a couple that the couple genuinely lacks. That is the gift.
Pick the occasion
step 01 · nine templates
Every occasion, written for the couple
The details worth reaching for
Whatever the occasion, these are the specifics that make a message to the couple sound like it came from someone who was actually paying attention.
- What they are like in a room together
- The thing one of them does that visibly improves the other
- How they handled a difficult period
- The dynamic outsiders notice and they do not
- What their home is like to be a guest in
- How they argue, or do not
- Something they built together
- The way they talk about each other when the other is not there
Every stop holds a moment
the path they walk
What goes wrong when people write to couples
Praising the institution rather than the pair
Generic remarks about love and marriage apply to everyone. Name what is specific to these two.
Addressing only one of them
Common when you know one better. Find something true about the other.
Advice about marriage
Rarely wanted, and it turns a warm message into a lecture.
Openings and sign-offs that fit this relationship
Ways to open
- “Watching the two of you in a room…”
- “There is something you two do that you cannot see…”
- “You are different around each other, in the best way…”
- “The pair of you have built…”
- “From the outside, what is obvious is…”
Ways to close
- “To both of you”
- “Here is to the next chapter”
- “With love to you both”
- “Keep doing whatever it is”
- “Delighted for you both”
Common questions
- What should you write to the couple?
- Writing to two people at once usually produces something addressed to neither. The default is to praise the relationship in the abstract, which tells them nothing they do not already have.. The message that lands names one specific thing rather than summarising the relationship.
- What should you avoid writing to the couple?
- Praising the institution rather than the pair. Generic remarks about love and marriage apply to everyone. Name what is specific to these two.
- How do you make a message to the couple sound personal?
- Replace one general phrase with something only you would know - what they are like in a room together, for instance. That single substitution is what separates a borrowed message from one that sounds like you.
Make it something the couple opens
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