Writing to nieces
Messages for your niece: 22 examples across 4 occasions
An aunt or uncle occupies a genuinely useful position: close enough to be trusted, far enough to have no authority to enforce. That means praise from you carries differently than praise from a parent.
A niece is likely to hear a lot about what she should do from people responsible for her. Hearing something about who she already is, from someone who is not, is rarer and lands harder.
The most valuable thing you can offer is an observation with no agenda attached.
Pick the occasion
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Every occasion, written for your niece
The details worth reaching for
Whatever the occasion, these are the specifics that make a message to your niece sound like it came from someone who was actually paying attention.
- Something she is interested in that adults keep dismissing
- A quality she has that reminds you of someone she would like to be compared to
- How she treats younger children
- Something she did that took nerve
- A talent she has not been told is a talent
- The way she argues, or thinks, or notices
- How she has changed since last year
- Something she said that you have repeated to other people
Every stop holds a moment
the path they walk
What goes wrong when people write to nieces
Sounding like a second parent
Advice from an aunt or uncle undercuts the main advantage of the role, which is being the adult who is not evaluating her.
Praising only politeness
"Such a good girl" is a compliment for the adults' benefit. Name something that is actually about her.
Writing as though she is younger than she is
Nieces grow faster than the family's mental image of them. Pitch the message at her current age.
Openings and sign-offs that fit this relationship
Ways to open
- “I have told several people about the thing you said…”
- “Nobody has probably mentioned this to you…”
- “You are the only person in this family who…”
- “I noticed something about you this year…”
- “For what it is worth, from the sidelines…”
Ways to close
- “Firmly on your side”
- “Keep going. It suits you”
- “Your favorite aunt says so”
- “Proud of you from over here”
- “Happy birthday, you”
Common questions
- What should you write to your niece?
- An aunt or uncle occupies a genuinely useful position: close enough to be trusted, far enough to have no authority to enforce. That means praise from you carries differently than praise from a parent.. The message that lands names one specific thing rather than summarising the relationship.
- What should you avoid writing to your niece?
- Sounding like a second parent. Advice from an aunt or uncle undercuts the main advantage of the role, which is being the adult who is not evaluating her.
- How do you make a message to your niece sound personal?
- Replace one general phrase with something only you would know - something she is interested in that adults keep dismissing, for instance. That single substitution is what separates a borrowed message from one that sounds like you.
Make it something your niece opens
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