Retirement
Retirement messages, written for 5 different relationships
Retirement cards default to jokes about golf and lie-ins, which skate over the fact that someone is ending a forty-year identity in a single afternoon.
The occasion is about a body of work, and almost nobody addresses it as such.
Pick the occasion
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What actually makes a retirement message land
Name what they built or maintained. Most retirees leave without ever being told what their cumulative effect was.
If they trained you, or set a standard you still follow, say so - that is the clearest evidence that the work outlasts the job.
The freedom jokes are fine as a closing note. They should not be the message.
Retirement messages by relationship
Who you are writing to changes the message more than the occasion does. Each page below is written for one relationship.
Timing and etiquette
- Not everyone retires happily. Some are pushed, some are anxious, some are leaving something they loved. Read the situation before writing the celebration.
- A card that names one specific thing they did is worth more than a group card with forty signatures.
- Mentioning what continues after them - a practice, a habit, a team - is the strongest possible compliment.
Common questions
- What should you write in a retirement message?
- Name what they built or maintained. Most retirees leave without ever being told what their cumulative effect was. If they trained you, or set a standard you still follow, say so - that is the clearest evidence that the work outlasts the job.
- How long should a retirement message be?
- Four to six sentences. What they did, what it changed, what continues without them, and then the light closing line.
- When should you send a retirement message?
- Not everyone retires happily. Some are pushed, some are anxious, some are leaving something they loved. Read the situation before writing the celebration.
Say it as something they open
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